English

References

• mybusinessenglish.com on YouTube
• John Owens, Common Errors in Technical Writing
• Markus Kuhn, How (not) to write an abstract

Tools:

• Academic-Writing-Check

Papers I like (clear, good style):

• Dan Boneh, Twenty Years of Attacks on the RSA Cryptosystem, February 1999, Notices of the AMS, http://www.ams.org/notices/199902/boneh.pdf
• Daniel J. Bernstein, Enumerating and counting smooth integers, 1991, 950518 (dra T).

Expressions

In my defense it was dark	Pour ma défense il faisait noir.
Don't get your knickers in a twist/knot	~ Calm down, ne fait pas de noeuds dans tes sous-vêtements
spritzing the SKUNK with eau de cologne.
hanging garlands from the corpses' ears
People go to the site looking for things → Things people go to the site looking for
X is 99 times more than Y, but it is 100 times that of Y.
As opposed to smthg	Au contraire de qch, au lieu de qch
By my count, you have...	D'après mes calculs, vous avez...

Don't say but say...

Some examples on how to say things simply and clearly

Don't say ...	... but say ...
there is still a correlation check to make sure that the OBE indeed reported that it was at the same location as the enforcement equipment and at the same time as reported by the equipment	there is also a specific check of location given by OBE against location of enforcement equipment
My coin has fallen	My penny dropped
The weight equals to the number	the weight equals the number — or the weight is equal to the number
fully determines the two others ones	fully determines the other two
convert conditions on bits to conditions	convert conditions on bits into conditions
In the light of	In light of
Our first attempt to such a reference model	Our first attempt at such a reference model
appeared in [4] by the name of	appeared in [4] under the name of
To spend some time to refine ...	To spend some time refining ...
Later we wrote our findings ...	Later we wrote up — or put — our findings ...
It has success probability of at most 2^...	It has success probability at most 2^...
both in the temporal as in the 1080 three spatial dimensions	both in the temporal and in the 1080 three spatial dimensions
we replaced our original padding by the multi-rate padding	we replaced our original padding with the multi-rate padding
Factorizing large integers	Factoring large integers (Factorizing is correct though but factoring seems better [1])
Evaluate a function for some input	Evaluate a function on some input
With probability of at least 1/2	With probability at least 1/2
Logarithm of x in the base 2	Logarithm of x to the base 2

Spelling mistakes

Bad	Good
fixed input length	fixed input-length or fixed-length input

Grammar

• Not to or to not ?

The default construction is not to + INF (like in I decided not to go). However the split infinitive construction to not + INF seems to be allowed as well (like in I decided to not go). Note that I decided not to go is not the same as I did not decide to go!

• half or half of?

[2], [3]

Both are usually valid (She spends half (of) her time travelling., Half (of) my friends live abroad.)

When using plurals, better specify the scope correctly (Half (of) my friends live abroad better than Half (of) friends live abroad)

half of before pronouns (Half of them)

half a usually ((half an apple is not a lot)), but a half also valid in measurements (a half pound)

• punctuations

comma — In an enumeration, a comma , before and is optional. Choose your favorite option and stick to it [4]. Adding this comma may clarify the enumeration if items are complex. This comma is called the serial comma or Oxford comma [5].

Tongue Twisters

Source: [6]

Bill Badger brought the bear a bit of boiled bacon in a brown bag.

Heather was hoping to hop to Taihiti To hack a hibiscus to hang on her hat. Now Heather has hundreds of hats on her hat rack. So how can a hop to Taihiti help that?

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers. A peck of pickled peppers Peter Piper picked. If Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers, How many pickled peppers did Peter Piper pick?

Red lorry, yellow lorry

Red leather robots, yellow leather robots

Seventeen slimy slugs in shiny sombreros sat singing short sad songs.

She sells seashells by the seashore. The shells she sells are surely seashells. So if she sells shells on the seashore, I'm sure she sells seashore shells.

The sixth sick sheik's sixth sheep's sick.

Six thick thistle sticks. Six thick thistles stick.

I slit a sheet, a sheet I slit. Upon this slitted sheet I sit.

Do scientists see thieves seize skies? If scientists see thieves seize skies, then where are the skies, the scientists see the thieves seize?

Thirty three thin Finns throw forty three frogs into four Thracian theatres.

The Awfullest Thistle: The successful thistle sifter, in sifting a sieve full of unsifted thistles, stuck three thousand thistles through the thick of his thumb.

Theophilus Thistle, the successful thistle sifter In sifting a sieve full of unsifted thistles, Thrust three thousand thistles through the thick of his thumb. If Theophilus Thistle, the successful thistle sifter, Can thrust three thousand thistles through the thick of his thumb, See thou, in sifting a sieve full of unsifted thistles, Thrust not three thousand thistles through the thick of thy thumb.

Which witch winds white weasel wool well?

How Much Wood Would A Woodchuck Chuck If A Woodchuck Could Chuck Wood? A Woodchuck Would Chuck As Much Wood As A Woodchuck Could, If A Woodchuck Could Chuck Wood.

Writing tips

• Avoid passive voice
• Avoid unnecessary details
• Set the scene progressively (step by step)
• Use the colon correctly

We obtain the following theorem:           // -- BAD --
We obtain the following theorem.           // -- CORRECT --
Theorem 8. foo ...

From John Owens [7],[8]:

• Use et al. correctly. "et al." means et alia. Use it when there are 3 authors or more

AuthorOne
AuthorOne and AuthorTwo
AuthorOne et al.

• Don't use citation as words :

A similar strategy is described in [15].                        // --BAD-- citation as word, 
A similar strategy is discussed by 15.                    // ... imagine if citation uses superscript -> looks really silly
A similar strategy is discussed by AuthorOne et al. [15]        // --CORRECT--

• Use short citation to avoid repeat:

AuthorOne discusses this point further in her dissertation [AuthorOne 2002].  // --BAD-- name repeated
AuthorOne discusses this point further in her dissertation [2002].            // --BETTER--

• First person, passive voice: Please write in first person and avoid the passive voice.
• Hyphenation: “We built a high-performance implementation.” “high-performance” is hyphenated because “high” modifies “performance” not “implementation”. It's not a “high implementation”. Here, “high-performance” is an adjective. But: “Our implementation has high performance.” Here, “performance” is a noun. No hyphen. Similarly: “throughput-oriented workloads” or “GPU-based implementation”.
  For some words, it's not clear if it should be hyphenated or not (e.g. “e-mail” vs. “email”). The general trend in English is to move toward non-hyphenation (e.g. “to-morrow” became “tomorrow”) so if I'm unsure, I usually trend toward non-hyphenation.
• Serial comma: “The serial comma is the comma used immediately before a coordinating conjunction (usually and or or, sometimes nor) preceding the final item in a list of three or more items.” (Wikipedia). Short rule: always use it in because it avoids confusion.
• Use of the word “only”: Be precise with this word! For example, “I only eat apples” and “I eat only apples”
• Writing units: If you're writing, say, “ten meters”, these are WRONG: “10m” or “10m”. It's “10 m” (non-breaking space, 10~m in LaTeX). Also, since "b" is already an abbreviation of "binary digit", don't write "10 kb" but "10 kbit".

Examples

• AES operates on date blocks of 16 bytes.
• For ease of presentation, we omit this operation here
• Let .... Given ..., one can .... Conversely, given ..., one can .... Since ..., this proves the converse statement.
• Then with probability at least 1/2 (over the choice of g)
• Since x takes time linear in log_2 d, a small d can improve performance by at least a factor of 10.
• Apply function x prior to signing.
• A fraction of the bits, parts of one of the factors p,q
• protect the full key → protect the entire key
• Expose half the most significant bits of the key — or

Expose half of the most significant bits of the key

• relies on the intractability of factoring polynomials — or

the intractability of the discrete logarithm problem

• A keystroke saved is a keystroke earned (and not won)
• If you expect this behavior to carry over to Vim's visual mode, you're in for a surprise.
• We'll discuss it at greater length.
• We are working with integers expressed in binary notation.
• ... as quite a wide variety of ... can be so described.
• ... (discussed in the next section) ... (discussed in the section after that)